got my application returned back - mistakes

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Attached please find some info regarding NOC 4131 and immigration requirements. I hope it can help you to determine what is important on your file to make a proper submission.

9.1. Minimum requirements

The officer reviews the applicant’s work experience to determine if the applicant meets theminimum requirements to apply as a skilled worker, as stipulated in R75.

The applicant must have at least one year of continuous full-time paid work experience, or the continuous part-time equivalent, in the category of Skill Type 0, or Skill Level A or B, according to the Canadian National Occupational Classification (NOC)

The work experience which will be assessed for all skilled worker applicants must:

• have occurred within the 10 years preceding the date of application;

• not be in an occupation that is considered a restricted occupation. At the time of printing, there were no occupations designated as restricted. However, for the most up-to-date listing, refer to the Skilled Workers and Professionals Web page at

http://www.cic.gc.ca/english/immigrate/skilled/index.asp.

The applicant must have:

• performed the actions described in the lead statement for the occupation (or occupations) as set out in the occupational description of the NOC (R75(2)(b));

• performed a substantial number of the main duties, including all of the essential duties, of the occupation as set out in the occupational description of the NOC (R75(2)(c)).

http://www5.hrsdc.gc.ca/NOC/English/NOC/2006/QuickSearch.aspx?val65=4131

4131 College and Other Vocational Instructors

This unit group includes instructors who teach applied arts, academic, technical and vocational subjects to students at community colleges, CEGEPs, agricultural colleges, technical and vocational institutes, language schools and other college level schools. This unit group also includes trainers who are employed by private training establishments, companies, community agencies and governments to deliver internal training or development courses. College teachers who are heads of departments are included in this group.

Example Titles

CEGEP teacher
college teacher
commercial art instructor
community college teacher
company trainer
computer training instructor
department chairperson – college
department head – CEGEP
firefighting instructor
language school instructor
teacher – institute of technology
teacher, legal assistant program
training officer – company
vocational institute teacher

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Main duties

College and other vocational instructors perform some or all of the following duties:

• Teach students using a systematic plan of lectures, demonstrations, discussion groups, laboratory work, shop sessions, seminars, case studies, field assignments and independent or group projects
• Develop curriculum and prepare teaching materials and outlines for courses
• Prepare, administer and mark tests and papers to evaluate students' progress
• Advise students on program curricula and career decisions
• Provide individualized tutorial/remedial instructions
• Supervise independent or group projects, field placements, laboratory work or hands-on training
• Supervise teaching assistants
• May provide consultation services to government, business and other organizations
• May serve on committees concerned with matters such as budgets, curriculum revision, and course and diploma requirements.
• These instructors specialize in particular fields or areas of study such as visual arts, dental hygiene, welding, engineering technology, policing, computer software, management and early childhood education.

Employment requirements

• A bachelor's degree, a college diploma or demonstrated expertise in the field of instruction is required.

• A master's degree in the field of instruction may be required.

• A certificate, diploma or degree in adult education may be required.

• For instructors of trades, completion of apprenticeship training and industry or trade certification are required. Additional courses in teaching or a provincial teaching certificate may be required.

Additional information

• In Québec, trades are taught in the secondary school system.
• Progression to administrative positions in post-secondary education is possible with experience.

Classified elsewhere

• Instructors teaching non-academic or non-vocational courses (in 4216 Other Instructors )
• Secondary School Teachers (4141)
• University Professors (4121)

 

adam711 wrote: Hi all I got my application back with a highlighted mistake, which is: "The main duties listed in Schedule 3, page 2 of your application are insufficient. Please provide a detailed description of your main duties performed in the identified occupation." in my application, i wrote: NOC 4131 less than 1 year -Deliever Cisco networking courses -Train on Cisco hardware/software NOC 4131 1 year but less than 2 -Deliever IT related courses so i just modified to this to: NOC 4131 1 year but less than 2 -Deliver Cisco networking courses -Train on Cisco hardware and software -Supervise the students working in the lab -Provide consultancy support for customers -Specialize in Routing, Switching, Security NOC 4131 1 year but less than 2 -Deliver general IT related courses -Provide basic IT and help desk support -Involve in setting up the labs for training -Participate in scheduling the courses -Supervise the students working in the lab can you please tell me if this is sufficient or not?